Showing posts with label Silver Rapier. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Silver Rapier. Show all posts

Saturday, June 14, 2025

Sylvain du Soleil - Silver Rapier

Sylvain du Soleil before Us, so well to see
Much praise, there's been tell! His rank set to swell, say We! 
Having seen the intel of foes he did quell, was key. 

Our Eastern Ruler Ryou who concurs with Queen - 
Indrakshi infers of fencers that spar who’s keen
Silver Rapier’s the award incurs so deemed 
At Les Beltaines, Barony of Havre des Glaces, AS LX 

Wordcount 65
Illumination and calligraphy by Fiona the Volatile


Virelai

AAB AAB AAB

5, 5, 2 syllables

 

Sylvain du Soleil

Before Us, so well 

To see


Much praise, there's been tell

His rank set to swell

say we 


Having seen the intel 

Of foes he did quell 

was key 

…….. 


For Eastern rulers 

Ryou who concurs 

with Queen


Indrakshi infers

of fencers that spar

who’s keen


Silver Rapier’s

the Award incurs 

So deemed 


At Les Beltaines, Barony of Havre des Glaces

AS LX 



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Saturday, November 23, 2024

Geoffrey Le Thressher - Silver Rapier

Even as one cannot make some composition of beautiful writings without employing the letters of the alphabet, so does it occur that this, the art of fencing: without its principle steps, one would have no foundation.  Geoffrey uses the footwork of practice, of study, and of the experience that earns, without which, one cannot move and advance.

Today We Majesties Matthew and Fiamuin, stand in the public hall of Rusted Woodlands, Our Royal Shire, with representatives of all the other places of Our ample dominion, The East Kingdom in this Year of Our Society, Fifty Nine.

And thus Geoffrey Thressher stands in possession of the Silver Rapier:

Argent, a chevron gules and in base a penguin affronty proper, on a chief gules three crosses crosslet fitchy argent

That which clearly represents how necessary, how useful, how honorable Geoffrey is using said disciplines, and how it was earned by him, by good habits and maximally in valor, in execution of his art.


Word Count 160

Calligraphy and illumination by Fiona O Maille


Photo by Fiona O Maille


Naturally, you must expect me to BLOG with Capo Ferro.
-Inigo Montoya
This began with a great conversation with the scribe, where they mentioned using the actual manuscript by Capo Ferro as the source. Which made my BLOG title a no brainer.
I got my hands on Great Representation of the Art of and Use of Fencing by Ridolofo Capoffero Translated by Jerek Swanger and William E Wilson Translated by Jerek Swanger and William E Wilson and began scouring the text to get a handle on how the language was used. 
I made judicious use of the first section: “Dedicated To the Most Serene Signore Don Francesco Maria Feltredella Rovere, sixth Duke Urbino”
With a few from particular plates further in the portfolio.


Even as one cannot make some composition of beautiful writings without employing the letters of the alphabet, so does it occur that this, the art of fencing: without its principle steps, one would have no foundation.  

Gotta love a 36 word sentence! When working within the strict and measured meters of the past it's nice to be able to stretch out and put an effusive amount of words into a scroll.

Much of this scroll is taken straight from the translated words of Capo Ferro himself.  He wrote so loquaciously it was appropriate to quote him as verbatim as I could.

“Even as one cannot make some composition of beautiful and judicious writings without employing the letters of the alphabet, so does it occur in this, Our art of fencing, that without the following….”


Geoffrey uses the footwork of practice, of study, and of the experience that earns, without which, one cannot move and advance.

Continuing the footwork theme throughout the scroll, while also expanding the praise of the recipient.


Today We Majesties Matthew and Fiamuin, stand in the public hall of Rusted Woodlands, Our Royal Shire, with representatives of all the other places of Our ample dominion, The East Kingdom in this Year of Our Society, Fifty Nine.

You can see how I adapted this quote from the dedication:
“...that it can stand alone in the public hall of your Royal Palace, and in the other public places of your ample Dominion…”

In this sort of format the spelling out of the Arabic numerals and eschewing the Latin in favor of writing the translation  of Anno Societatis seemed more appropriate for the scroll.  


And thus Geoffrey Thressher stands in possession of the Silver Rapier:

Argent, a chevron gules and in base a penguin affronty proper, on a chief gules three crosses crosslet fitchy argent

The recipient was referred to as Lord in two entries available on the EK wiki. I found one entry in Order of Precedence of the Kingdom of AEthelmearc by Order of March and by Alphabetical Order. They have no entry in the EK OoP. Their name and Arms had passed, via the East at the beginning  of 2024. This investigation process took up almost the same amount of time as the composition process.  There is a great deal of hidden work in the creation of the scroll, and it can end up falling on any participant of the process.
With all this in mind, even though their Golden Alce is an armigerous award, the scribe and myself deemed it appropriate to include the recipient’s Arms in the scroll. That and there is a penguin in their Arms. Who doesn’t want to put a penguin on a scroll?


That which clearly represents how necessary, how useful, how honorable Geoffrey is using said disciplines, and how it was earned by him, by good habits and maximally in valor, in execution of his art.

The conclusion is generally a reiteration of what the body of the scroll. In this scroll the final sentence is the summation.  No less effective, but definitely a different structure than I normally use. When read out loud this will be emphasized as the recipient receives the scroll.


This Was my first attempt at writing a fencing scroll directly from Capa Ferro.  Like so many geeks I can recite the fight scene from the Princess Bride by heart, but it is another thing to actually study what he wrote and his style. Definitely an experience worth having.

Saturday, November 19, 2022

Mairi Crawford - Silver Rapier

 And so Mohammad Sultan
Brenhines Corotica
Sovereigns of this Eastern span
Love to homage and hurrah 

Mairi Crawford’s time’s today
Accept praise for clout she shows 
Skilled repertoire of swordplay 
Has fame against far flung foes

A joy to face on the field
And now The Silver Rapier
Awards for Mairi to wield 
Honor to add to her here 

At  Rusted Woodlands shire 
On the 19th November 
AS LVII We are 
Pleased to praise this fine Fencer 

Word Count 77

KEY

ABAB Rhyme scheme
Internal rhymes in line 3 & 4
Alliteration

Alliteration together in line 4


A And so Mohammad Sultan

B Brenhines Corotica

A Sovereigns of this Eastern span

B Love to homage and hurrah 


A Mairi Crawford’s time’s today

B Accept praise for clout she shows 

A Skilled repertoire of swordplay 

Has fame against far flung foes


A A joy to face on the field

B Right now The Silver Rapier

A award's for Mairi to wield 

B honor to add to her here 


A At  Rusted Woodlands shire 

B  On the 19th November 

A AS LVII We are 

B Pleased to praise this fine Fencer


"Come in!" exclaimed the Ghost. "Come in, and BLOG me better, man."

Half an hour after beginning to research this scroll, I posted this to Facebook:
“Working on poetry that ostensibly is in my own persona. Man it's complex.  But wait, I'm complex!  Maybe I picked a good persona after all!”
Old Irish Poetry is as complex as Norse Poetry and so much fun!
The recipient of this scroll was of a later period than the Old Irish Pelican I had written for this past Barleycorn in September, so I needed a bit more research.  Thankfully most of the sources I had used for that scroll -  Irish Syllabic Poetry  and Three Most Common Bardic Meters - included information on their later period counterparts.  I also checked The Poetry Collective and Brian Ó Ruairc, mo rogha leannán.

With all of that I settled on this structure:
7 syllables
ABAB Rhyme scheme
Internal rhymes in line 3&4
Alliteration
Alliteration together in line 4
I broke down the recommendation into some key subjects, and set to work. A complex poetic form is so much fun to write - even if on occasion it can involve cursing long ago authors in a different language.  Fitting English into these other languages is a challenge I love.

A And so Mohammad Sultan
B Brenhines Corotica
I could fit no alliteration into this line as Her Majesty's name and preferred title fit the syllable count exactly.  This is a case of the requirements of a scroll superseding the requirements of the poetry.

A Sovereigns of this Eastern span
B Love to homage and hurrah 
The 4th line final two words of the sentence are supposed to be alliterative. I tried several times to write this without the use of the conjunction but could not figure out a way.  So I employed a literary device of ignoring that it’s there and treating homage and hurrah as the final alliterations on the line. There could even be an argument made that all three words do alliterate depending on how one prononces the H.  Either way it made for a nice transition into the next verse.

A Mairi Crawford’s time’s today
B Accept praise for clout she shows  
Had I an  extra syllable to play with here, I would have written “To accept praise” or “Accepting praise” just to keep the flow of the line.  A good herald should be able to read it correctly.

A Skilled repertoire of swordplay 
Has fame against far flung foes
Repertoire/far is a bit of a stretch and the rhyme will depend on the herald's reading.  It is an interior rhyme though and if it isn’t stressed, I don’t think the reading will be lessened.
The last line of this verse especially pleases me.  I managed 4 alliterative words in a 6 word sentence. The write up emphasized how proud they were to perceive the recipient as a threat on the fencing field.  I was glad to work that into the body of the scroll.

A A joy to face on the field
B Right now The Silver Rapier
A Award's for Mairi to wield 
B Honor to add to her here 
This verse is one that most solidly fits the rhyme and meter of the Deibhidhe Quatrain. The end rhymes are all full hit rhymes and the interior rhyme is solid. The alliteration of the 4th line is a little rough as I am counting Award and Wield as the alliteration.

A At Rusted Woodlands shire 
B  On the 19th November 
A AS LVII We are 
B Pleased to praise this fine Fencer 
I am proud that I managed to fit all the final bits of information into the rhyme and meter.The alliteration for the first two lines is missing, alas, but I managed to allierate with two letters in the last line!

Of the three scrolls that I have going out at 100 Minutes War, I think that this one was my favorite to write, and I had good experiences with all three! While this one was a new verse form, it was so similar to Norse and Old Irish poetry and I had done so much of the research just a few months prior that it was all in the, shall we say, current storage in my brain.